Monday 29 June 2015

tow random anmals con bind

one day i went to the zoo i saw a OUTER and a SEAL they swam so fast kaboom! there was a masive transformens! they bothe con bide to gerther and it made a sloter they escapt the zoo and went in to the ochen and got eat by a shark then the shark said yum yum in my tumm then swam a way.

1 comment:

  1. Nice story Nick! I like how you described how they combined. A next step for you is to use speech marks.

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