Elections: I would march for National

Introduction

Opening Line (HOOK)	I would only march for the National party	Checklist Present tense yes Verbs yes Conjunctions - 1/2 yes Pronouns yes Paragraph Ideas yes
State your own opinion	I think the world could use a big change in the way people act
Explain what points you are going to cover	I’m going to cover these health,environment and economy
Linking sentence to your first point	A good policies is Raising drinking age to twenty

Paragraph One (For) Topic:

Topic Sentence(State the policy)	Raising drinking age to twenty	Checklist Present Tense yes Conjunctions - 1/2/3 yes Verbs - Modal and feelings based verbs yes Emotive language yes Pronouns yes
Explain the policy	This means that to buy alcohol you have to be twenty
First reason why it is a good policy	Because it will stop younger people from doing damage to the world or other people
Second reason why it is a good policy.	People at twenty they are more responsible and they're older so they will have more control over it.
Link to next paragraph	Another really important  policy is oppose bans on alcohol advertising and sponsorship

Paragraph Two (For) Topic:

Topic Sentence(State the policy)	oppose bans on alcohol advertising and sponsorship	Checklist Present Tense yes Conjunctions - 1/2/3 yes Verbs - Modal and feelings based verbs yes Emotive language yes Pronouns yes
Explain the policy	I think this is a very good policy because it will stop people/young people getting triggered into buying alcohol
First reason why it is a good policy	It will stop car crashes and crimes happening
Second reason why it is a good policy.	It will stop people doing dumb stuff they will regret later on
Link to next paragraph	Another very cool but good policy is

Optional Extra Paragraph (For) Topic:

Topic Sentence(State the policy)	double funding for conservation on private and mori land.	Checklist Present Tense yes Conjunctions - 1/2/3 yes Verbs - Modal and feelings based verbs yes Emotive language yes Pronouns yes
Explain the policy	It will help the mori from having to keep searching for an island day and night.
First reason why it is a good policy	Also people that have some sort of problem that may hurt people can go to a private island and when there better they can come back.
Second reason why it is a good policy.	The mori can help the new zealanders by building huts for (the homeless well that's if they want to)
Link to next paragraph	support sustainable fishing methods

Paragraph Three (Against) Topic:

Topic Sentence(State the policy)	support sustainable fishing methods	Checklist Present Tense yes Conjunctions - 1/2/3/,4 yes Verbs - Modal and feelings based verbs yes Emotive language yes Pronouns yes
Explain the policy	It helps people in need of food and if they go fishing for it they can’t catch endangered fish.
First reason why it is a good policy	It helps the others get enough fish so that they can get as much as they want.
Second reason why it is a good policy.	It also makes it so that we don’t run out of fish if the ocean ran out of fish the animal that eats fish will go extinct and the animal that eats that animal will become extinct.
Link to next paragraph	So that why i think that policy would be good.

Conclusion

Concluding statement	So these are these are the policies and the reasons they are good.	Checklist Present tense yes Verbs yes Conjunctions - 1/2 yes Pronouns yes Paragraph Ideas yes
State your own opinion	Any way i think that all the policies above.
Explain what points you have talked about	I have talked about health,economy and environment.
Finishing rhetorical question	Anyway those are the policies are the ones i think are good.