one day i went to the zoo i saw a OUTER and a SEAL they swam so fast kaboom! there was a masive transformens! they bothe con bide to gerther and it made a sloter they escapt the zoo and went in to the ochen and got eat by a shark then the shark said yum yum in my tumm then swam a way.
Nice story Nick! I like how you described how they combined. A next step for you is to use speech marks.
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