treaty of witang

ww1 slide show

Elections: I would march for National

Introduction

Opening Line (HOOK)	I would only march for the National party	Checklist Present tense yes Verbs yes Conjunctions - 1/2 yes Pronouns yes Paragraph Ideas yes
State your own opinion	I think the world could use a big change in the way people act
Explain what points you are going to cover	I’m going to cover these health,environment and economy
Linking sentence to your first point	A good policies is Raising drinking age to twenty

Paragraph One (For) Topic:

Topic Sentence(State the policy)	Raising drinking age to twenty	Checklist Present Tense yes Conjunctions - 1/2/3 yes Verbs - Modal and feelings based verbs yes Emotive language yes Pronouns yes
Explain the policy	This means that to buy alcohol you have to be twenty
First reason why it is a good policy	Because it will stop younger people from doing damage to the world or other people
Second reason why it is a good policy.	People at twenty they are more responsible and they're older so they will have more control over it.
Link to next paragraph	Another really important  policy is oppose bans on alcohol advertising and sponsorship

Paragraph Two (For) Topic:

Topic Sentence(State the policy)	oppose bans on alcohol advertising and sponsorship	Checklist Present Tense yes Conjunctions - 1/2/3 yes Verbs - Modal and feelings based verbs yes Emotive language yes Pronouns yes
Explain the policy	I think this is a very good policy because it will stop people/young people getting triggered into buying alcohol
First reason why it is a good policy	It will stop car crashes and crimes happening
Second reason why it is a good policy.	It will stop people doing dumb stuff they will regret later on
Link to next paragraph	Another very cool but good policy is

Optional Extra Paragraph (For) Topic:

Topic Sentence(State the policy)	double funding for conservation on private and mori land.	Checklist Present Tense yes Conjunctions - 1/2/3 yes Verbs - Modal and feelings based verbs yes Emotive language yes Pronouns yes
Explain the policy	It will help the mori from having to keep searching for an island day and night.
First reason why it is a good policy	Also people that have some sort of problem that may hurt people can go to a private island and when there better they can come back.
Second reason why it is a good policy.	The mori can help the new zealanders by building huts for (the homeless well that's if they want to)
Link to next paragraph	support sustainable fishing methods

Paragraph Three (Against) Topic:

Topic Sentence(State the policy)	support sustainable fishing methods	Checklist Present Tense yes Conjunctions - 1/2/3/,4 yes Verbs - Modal and feelings based verbs yes Emotive language yes Pronouns yes
Explain the policy	It helps people in need of food and if they go fishing for it they can’t catch endangered fish.
First reason why it is a good policy	It helps the others get enough fish so that they can get as much as they want.
Second reason why it is a good policy.	It also makes it so that we don’t run out of fish if the ocean ran out of fish the animal that eats fish will go extinct and the animal that eats that animal will become extinct.
Link to next paragraph	So that why i think that policy would be good.

Conclusion

Concluding statement	So these are these are the policies and the reasons they are good.	Checklist Present tense yes Verbs yes Conjunctions - 1/2 yes Pronouns yes Paragraph Ideas yes
State your own opinion	Any way i think that all the policies above.
Explain what points you have talked about	I have talked about health,economy and environment.
Finishing rhetorical question	Anyway those are the policies are the ones i think are good.

Koru Games

Koru Games Reflection

In the Koru Games the sport I competed in was Touch rugby

Our team won 4 games

I found the experience to be okay because we got 9th place

In terms of working with Individuals and Groups; my solo level is Multistructural because my team work is not the best but i can still get along with others

For Teamwork; my solo level is Multistructural because i’m not the bst at it but i can still do it

Individuals and groups	I need help to work in a group (with teachers or other students	I can work in a group with my friends.	I can work in a group with anyone in my  year level or team	I can respond positively to the needs of others	I can reflect on how well I work with the group and seek feedback on how I can improve
Teamwork	I need help to interact with others. I need help to participate in a team.	I can interact with others one to one. I can participate in a team.	I can interact with others in a small group. I can participate and take responsibility in a team.	I can participate and take responsibility in a team and explain my choices in terms of team outcomes.	I can participate in creating healthy teams by taking responsibility and critical action.

For reading over the past five weeks I have been focussing on:

I can monitor my reading for accuracy and sense, demonstrating that I have the confidence to adjust my reading (e.g., by varying the speed of reading, by rereading, and by attending to the most important information) when I encounter difficulties.

And

I can make connections between my prior knowledge and the concrete examples in a text in order to understand abstract ideas in the text.

During this time, I have been reading with the teacher and also using an online tool called Read Theory to help practise these skills.

My two favourite texts I read were:

1. Books vs. Movies
2. Making Your Own Pretzels

Here is a screenshot of my Read Theory results