Writing reflection

WHAT?

This week I am reflecting on one of my writing goals

IALT: Improve my writing by learning how to:

* use a variety of sentence starters

This week I have been focusing on how to write a drop-in clause

SO WHAT?

Here is an example of a drop-in clause

Mr Forman is our teacher.	He loves his red car.
Mr Forman, who is our teacher, loves his red car.

Mr Forman is the subject of the sentence.

We change ‘He’ to ‘who’

We place commas around the clause we ‘drop-in’

MY EXAMPLES:

Here are two examples of a drop-in clause that I have created.

[1] Nicholas, who likes being a cow, is awesome.

[2] The teacher, who had been hiding in a box of bananas, shouted at her class.

NOW WHAT?

I rate my understanding level at 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

My confidence level with using these types of sentences independently in my writing is

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

my writing goals for term 2

I.A.L.T: improve my writing by learning how to;

Organise my writing into paragraphs

Use a variety of sentence starters

Use the correct language features of a narrative-

dialogue

Use a variety of sentence starts

to help me with this goal i am useing a sentence

starter menu.

harold

                                                life education

                                                        WHAT?: On Tuesday we went the life education van

                                                       SO WHAT?: We learned about healthy eating for our bodies.

I learned that biscuits have much more sugar than I thought..

I also learned that it is important to have a balanced diet.

                                                       NOW WHAT?  I'm going to do spend less time on the computer and less eating unhealthy foods. I am going to more fitness.

                                                      

                                                                       

year 6 camp

what?

last week the year 6 students went to waipara for a 3 day camp

my reading goal

what?

This is the book I am currently reading as part of my reading goal which is to be able to read for longer periods of time and retain meaning.

So What?

I like that it has really cool drawing's and real life drawing's and it has moments where you get a shock.

now what?

my goal is also to read a variety of genre. this book is a mystery. the next genre i am going to read is my robot buddy. It is a fiction book.

In stead of giving me a natella I got ham

Dad I did not now it was susig sizzle can you bring 2 one dollars